Afternoon Storm
2:59 pm, sky is darkening as she dresses in layers of gray,
the wind blows in short hot puffs as if mother nature is
trying to catch her breath. A bell rings, bodies moving, a shout,
a wave, footsteps running. A door slams shut, the light turns
green. 3:00 pm and the rain begins to splatter.
First One Eh?
ReplyDeleteFantastic!!
You sure know what you are doing!
Excellent 55 My friend.
I hope you found this to be fun, creative, and challenging.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Excellent. Really carries the feeling of a storm front moving in.
ReplyDeleteMine is here. Scroll down a little.
welcome to the wonderful world of 55...very nicely done...love me a good storm...
ReplyDeletemy 55 is up!
there's nothing like a storm to make you slow down a little, makes for a nice follow-up to all the scurrying :) your 55 was a really nice read!
ReplyDeleteNice one. I can feel the storm approaching.
ReplyDeleteoh kool poem/story 55 thing
ReplyDeletevery impressive 55.
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